Darkwiz666's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Humans Vs Monsters]

Cut down on the wobble and mix up with some relevant stabs instead (an example being when you cut it a few times and insert the gun reload sound clip).

Could have been longer, too, so you could have added more variety to the track.

DanielGalarza responds:

Thanks for your advice ! :D

[Spaze - No Limits]

There is ONE thing about real Dubstep that you can NOT gloss over, and that is the half-time syncopated rhythm.

This track has none of it: it is not Dubstep. Having a oscillator wobble does not make the track Dubstep, and wobble predates Dubstep itself, almost back to the mid to late 70's if I recall correctly.

This is Trace AT BEST, and it doesn't exactly fit in that category either.

SpazeMusic responds:

Please listen to the entire song before you even think about typing a comment like that.
Also, giving a 2/5 because of "wrong genre" is just stupid.
Thanks for your comment though.

[Blue Blossoms - Preview]

It's awesome!!!

So....when ya gonna finish it GAWD DAMN IT! ):[
I want teh epic soundz cometh from my speakerz!!!

Plz say you'll finish it (and don't lie to meh! :[ )

Jenni-Harry4eva3 responds:

Haha. Bro, this is already finished. It's up on my soundcloud lol. You can listen to it on your speakers all you want lol.

For the rest of your, my soundcloud name has been changed. It's /jandre_paris :)

[xKore - Fire]

Shouldn't this be in Dubstep?!

It's fricking awesome! And alot more of the track seems like it has dubstep influences then D&B ones (mostly the amount of wobbling after the 1st drop @ 0:45 = Dirty Dubstep with D&B Influences).

You better finish this or I'm going set YOU on fire, ya hear?! ):]

xKore responds:

It's halfstep drum and bass. aka drumstep.

[Good Day Sir (DUBstep)]

I like it, but...

Something needs to be done with the vocal clips...
1) They get over shadowed by everything else, even in the intro (turn the volume up maybe?)
2) It could use some more variation...maybe slice it up and/or scratch it or change the pitch at certain points. It would also help extend the song and build interest as it moves along.
3) I totally dislike the way it fades at the end...pretty short for something with so much potential, imho.

Zizmo responds:

Thanks for the great suggestions! I always like when people leave helpful reviews and trust me, your suggestions wont go unheard when I decide to work on this tune some more ;)

[Super Mario Bros. (Punk Remix)]

Nice! But...

Doesn't this sound more among the lines of something that's Ska (Sublime for example)? Its mostly all the trumpet stuff going on in there...

But good song none the less! Good job!

giftedbuttwisted responds:

Nahh not Sublime, more Less Than Jake/Reel Big Fish

[Polaroid (DnB CTSG type thing)]

AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

You darkness! You black....evil...black magic, DARKNESS!~
I got ear pwn'd....nice DnB! Good UMFH! to it....^~^

WritersBlock responds:

Lol, thanks. Although, as far as DnB goes, it's not very evil at all, just cool.

[g a m e . o v e r]

Good way to die...>_<;

I can see that you were also victim of the idiots who don't vote fair...2.xx? That's not very possible as soon as everything during the day gets submitted...

Anyways, this is pretty upbeat for a song that you hear after you go splat....good job!~

snayk responds:

Yeah, it's kind of a ritual; I submit a song, it gets insta-zero voted :D

I didn't actually make it with "game over" in mind, but when I showed it to the guy I made the tracks for, he said it would work perfectly as such. After listening to it over a few times, I think I see what he's talking about.

Thanks for the listen+review!

[breezy daze]

For a Video Game track, it pretty Ambient...

Never heard of anything like that before...but it just didn't grab me in during the start...
Good luck on that game tho! (Send me a link when its done...or I'll snap your neck...)

snayk responds:

I guess it starts off ambient; kind of like an old Metroid game, perhaps. At 0:58, though, it gets a little more upbeat.

Thanks for the review!

[DV-The Days We Remember]

Nothing too special...

And I don't think you should have used Sweeps during the Intro of the song...that sound really doesn't have much use for it...and FL DOES have some really good sounds to replace it. But good use of Sytrus!~

DenVessidence responds:

ya i only have fl studio 5, so im pretty limited on what i can use. but ya this isnt a finnished project, still gonna work on it. im also gettin new gear soon, i hope.