I like it, but...
Something needs to be done with the vocal clips...
1) They get over shadowed by everything else, even in the intro (turn the volume up maybe?)
2) It could use some more variation...maybe slice it up and/or scratch it or change the pitch at certain points. It would also help extend the song and build interest as it moves along.
3) I totally dislike the way it fades at the end...pretty short for something with so much potential, imho.
Thanks for the great suggestions! I always like when people leave helpful reviews and trust me, your suggestions wont go unheard when I decide to work on this tune some more ;)
Hmm...
You made valid points...but why not turn it into something more respectable than a rant by some 20 something year old dude?
Hell, after I heard your stuff, I thought, why not put the rant over that with some angry overtones? Bet it would make top 5 for sure...
*sniff sniff* I smell pro...grrrr
I DO like the intro for the song...its like the part where the two battlers stare at each other before they start whupping each others asses...awesome.
And the play time is something you don't get everyday...a good song that plays for 5 minutes? Where do you get off ):[?! lol
10/10 5/5!
Now make moar...we will drain the sleeps from your face and YOU SHALL PLEASE US WITH MOAR MUSICKX!
Time...
I.ve loved this son for the last 5 years of my life...and Its been in my head through some crappy times, but phee!!!~
Love this song..!
Hmm...
You got to add something on to the start...its too empty.
The vocals are what made it stick first...
Lol! She is the master of NG (one of them, anyway)
"This song suffers from inconsistency problems"
Apparently, you don't listen to music much...diversity is what makes the song...too much repetition and you get a drawn out techno song...one that everyone has heard. We cant be having that!
Been quite some time since we have heard from the great PX9...^^
QUESTION: Do you DJ in real life or something? It just seems like it, or you said it before in a comment on one of you other works...:/
wow....how original!
"I decided since i live in china nowadays i might as well make a chinese style dance song."
If only this could happen for ever country...it dont work out for people who live in the U.S. (our 'original' music is Jazz, RnB, Country...nothing that you can really base anything off easily or at all)
Catchy tune...10/10 5/5
oooooooooooo!~
I gotz dim shivers down meh spinez!!! Nice work!
Now imagine a real orchestra doing this....^~^
It was ok, but...
If you would come back to it and fix it up a bit, I bet it would be a portal legend...
Until then...its just OK.
Nice! But...
Doesn't this sound more among the lines of something that's Ska (Sublime for example)? Its mostly all the trumpet stuff going on in there...
But good song none the less! Good job!
Nahh not Sublime, more Less Than Jake/Reel Big Fish
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